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You have decided to sell your television and were wondering is your friend would be interested in buying the same. Write a letter to your friend In your letter say 1. Why do you want to sell it 2. Describe the television 3. Fix up a meeting time

You have decided to sell your television and were wondering is your friend would be interested in buying the same. Write a letter to your friend In your letter say 1. Why do you want to sell it 2. Describe the television 3. Fix up a meeting time x0WEo
Dear Ravi, I hope you are doing well. I just wanted to have a quick chat with you as I have decided to sell off my television & thought to first ask people in my friend circle if anyone would be interested, before getting into commercial selling platform. I have been using this television since 2 years, its appearance still gives a vibe of newly purchased television as I have handled it with utmost care. It’s 55 inch in size, black in color Sony Bravia LED Television with 3D display & having inbuilt wifi as well as different ports such as HDMI & auxiliary cable. I had made a purchase of $500 along with the warranty service of 5 years. You can claim it if in case any issue arises. Could you please spare sometime this weekend to have a catch up over a coffee? You can come at my place & have the TV tested before making a purchase. I can’t wait to see you! Your Friend, Tehsin
Dear Ravi,

I hope you are doing well. I
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wanted to have a quick chat with you as I have decided to sell off my
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have been using this
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television
since 2 years, its appearance
still
gives a vibe of
newly
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purchased
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television
as I have handled it with utmost care. It’s
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55 inch
in size,
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black in color
Sony
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Bravia
LED
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Television
with 3D display & having inbuilt
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wifi
as well
as
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different
ports such as HDMI & auxiliary cable. I had made a
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purchase
of $500 along with the warranty service of 5 years. You can claim it if in case any issue arises.

Could you
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please
spare sometime this weekend to have a catch up over a coffee? You can
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come
at my place & have the TV
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tested
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before
making a
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purchase
.

I can’t wait to
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see
you!

Your Friend,

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Tehsin

IELTS letter You have decided to sell your television and were wondering is your friend would be interested in buying the same. Write a letter to your friend In your letter say 1. Why do you want to sell it 2. Describe the television 3. Fix up a meeting time

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168 words
6.0
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