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Talking about the metaphor "Language is like cake"

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Hello! My name is Nhien from Ho Chi Minh, Vietnam. Talking about the metaphor “Language is Like Cake” I would like to show some of my points about it. Cakes sometimes are really good, sweet and delicious but sometimes are awful and no one wants to taste them. Why are they so different? Because the bakers have many different ways to make, bake and serve them. The way the bakers make cakes attractive and manageable for their customers is nearly the same the way teachers make English attractive and manageable for their students. When bakers make cakes, they take time to decorate and sculpt them beautifully. Teaching English is similar to it. Teachers must have different methods, tools and spend much time preparing their lessons interestingly. Besides, there are many ways to present our cake. Like, we cut it into pieces that people can handle and we can’t give them a whole cake at one time and it must be appetizing. And just like serving cakes language should be served in easily digestible and attractive slices to students
Hello! My name is
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English attractive and manageable for their students. When bakers
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IELTS letter Talking about the metaphor "Language is like cake"

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  American English
2 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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