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Writing a letter to a friend to find a part time job offer

Writing a letter to a friend to find a part time job offer j92pX

Hi Sam, Hope you’re doing great my friend. I’m planing to come to the Toronto by next month, and I might need your help to find out good part time opportunity I was selected to western university for a MBA program. That take 2 years to completeWhile I’m stay and study I was planing to attend some kind of part time work. Since it can be helpful to fulfill my daily expenses as well as can be a better way to experience the community. And to be honest I found the living expenses is much higher in the downtown comparatively other places. So having some kind of alternative income will really helpful. Since you’re living in Toronto for such a long period of time I thought I might get help to find you to get recommendation and help to find out part time job. I’m more into work in restaurant, coffee shops or Walmart since I heard that are the easiest places that student get part time offers Hope to see you soon and will ring you once I arrived to the airportCheersJane

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