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you are working in a school write a letter to the prncipal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teachers in your school.In your letter say how long have you known him or her describe his or her qualifications Explain why you think he or she would be suitable for th job

you are working in a school write a letter to the prncipal to recommend your friend for the position of sports teachers in your school. In your letter say how long have you known him or her describe his or her qualifications Explain why you think he or she would be suitable for th job XDOEr

I am Mrs. Harshani Kahingala who is conducting science subject for Grade 10 and 11 students and I am writing in reard to vacancy in position of sports teacher. First of all, I would like to recommend one of my friends for that availability. Currently she teaches at Crist Church Girls college as a Health studies and sport teacher and previously she worked at under sports ministry as a sport instructor. I have known her well since I was in primary school, thus, I know her's an excellent ability in athletic and other playground activities because she held leadership of school team of Netball from 2011 to 2014, furthermore she was team captain of university girls' cricket team as well and she has perfect teaching skills to manage every thing in well mannaer. Since she is an only teacher to that her current school, ther principal not allow her to get any transfer but she is willing to join us due to the high reputation of our college and her home town is very close to the our institute place and so on our school benefited with her talents, skills, knowledge and more experience. I attached my friends covering letter and cv for your easy reference. Thank you for consideing my recommendation and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely

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because
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only
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current
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allow
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get
 any transfer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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join
 us due to the high reputation of our college and her home town is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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the our institute
 place and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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school
 benefited with her talents, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, knowledge and more experience.

I attached my friends covering letter and Possible spelling mistake found.CVCDcmCTVUVcf
cv
 for your easy reference. Thank you for Possible spelling mistake found.considering
consideing
 my recommendation and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsincerely.sincerely!sincerely?sincerely:sincerely,sincerely;
sincerely