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Write a letter to someone you met at your company's meeting. In your letter you should, Thank him for taking part in the company's meeting. Try to elaborate on the importance of this role in the meeting. And let him know about another meeting to be held next month.

Write a letter to someone you met at your company's meeting. In your letter you should, Thank him for taking part in the company's meeting. Try to elaborate on the importance of this role in the meeting. And let him know about another meeting to be held next month. x0WL9
Dear Jack, I am writing this letter to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for your participation in our recent meeting which *was* held at townhall last Sunday. As you know our company is working on an Artificial *Intelligence* *project* and we wanted to *organize* a short meeting regarding the *orientation* about it with our Team of developers. I really appreciate your effort to make this happen *despite* your full calendar. Since our last successful meeting I must say that you have exceptional skill to deliver *and impart* your knowledge to *the participants* and my entire team *have* become more comfortable to launch their new project because of your detailed explanation about their concerns and queries. As Stated above we have received tremendous *positive feedback* from our workers and as such my firm has decided to *enlist* you for a new session for one of our new Team. The next meeting is scheduled for next month at the same *venue* I am fully aware of your hectic timetable, however I would appreciate if you could devote some time for the *aforesaid* meeting. *Looking forward for your prompt and positive response*. Yours Sincerely, Virendra
Dear Jack,

I am writing this letter to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for your participation in our recent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
which *was* held at
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townhall
last Sunday.

As you know our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is working on an Artificial *Intelligence* *project* and we wanted to *organize* a short
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
regarding the *orientation* about it with our Team of developers. I
really
appreciate your effort to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
this happen *despite* your full calendar.

Since our last successful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
say that you have exceptional
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
to deliver *and impart* your knowledge to *the participants* and my entire team *have* become more comfortable to launch their new project
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of your detailed explanation about their concerns and queries.

As Stated above we have received tremendous *
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
feedback* from our workers and as such my firm has decided to *enlist* you for a new session for one of our new Team. The
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
is scheduled
for
next
month at the same *venue*

I am
fully
aware of your hectic timetable,
however
I would appreciate if you could devote
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time for the *aforesaid* meeting.

*Looking forward for your prompt and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
respons
Replace by the typographical symbol.
e*.


Yours
Sincerely
,

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Virendra
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IELTS letter Write a letter to someone you met at your company's meeting. In your letter you should, Thank him for taking part in the company's meeting. Try to elaborate on the importance of this role in the meeting. And let him know about another meeting to be held next month.

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9 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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