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There is a sport stadium in your neighbourhood where large number of people come to watch games each weekend. Tis cause you and neighbours some issues. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter; •Explain who you are and where you live. • Describe the problems the stadium causes. • Suggest a solution.

There is a sport stadium in your neighbourhood where large number of people come to watch games each weekend. Tis cause you and neighbours some issues. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter; •Explain who you are and where you live. • Describe the problems the stadium causes. • Suggest a solution. gxP53
Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are fine in your place. I am writing this letter to complain about the noise comming from stadium. Firstly, I am Alash Sanjel, I am ftom kathmandu Nepal, also It's situated on two sides of beautiful bagmati river, and it lies on eastern part of my state. However, currently I am a student as well as part-time worker as a chef by profession. In addition, These days in our community stadium match are held on weekly basis, also It's significant for all scholars to watch several games in their free time and recharge their battery, although due to the huge crowd we are facing issue in the society. Moreover, I didn't concerntrate on my study as well as I am unable to get enough sleep. As a result, I would like to transfer this stadium in open space or far from community building. I look forward to your positive responce. Yours faithfully, Mike
Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are fine in your place. I am writing this letter to complain about the noise
comming
from stadium.
Firstly
, I am
Alash
Sanjel
, I am
ftom
kathmandu
Nepal,
also
It's situated on two sides of
beautiful
bagmati
river, and it lies on eastern part of my state.
However
,
currently
I am a student
as well
as part-time worker as a chef by profession.
In addition
, These days in our community stadium match
are held
on weekly basis,
also
It's significant for all scholars to
watch
several games in their free time and recharge their battery, although due to the huge crowd we are facing issue in the society.
Moreover
, I didn't
concerntrate
on my study
as well
as I am unable to
get
enough
sleep.
As a result
, I would like to transfer this stadium in open space or far from community building. I look forward to your
positive
responce
. Yours
faithfully
,
Mike
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IELTS letter There is a sport stadium in your neighbourhood where large number of people come to watch games each weekend. Tis cause you and neighbours some issues. Write a letter to your local council. In your letter; •Explain who you are and where you live. • Describe the problems the stadium causes. • Suggest a solution.

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