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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter,  Say where you think you left the paper.  Explain why they also so important.  Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter,  Say where you think you left the paper.  Explain why they also so important.  Tell the manager what you want him/her to do. PVLJK
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to ask your help to find some important papers. I stayed at the hotel for the business meeting last Tuesday. I just realized left them in the room 1110. They are yellow and with my name on the top of each paper. I might leave them in the drawer of the desk, or on the sofa. The papers are my tax return forms of 2021 which are very important and confidential. I need them to file my tax return by the end of this month. Otherwise, I will get the penalty for late filing tax refund from the government. I know them seem like useless paper that might have been throw away already. Please help me to ask Lost and Found Department to see if they seen and kept them. If they had found them, please inform me by a phone call as soon as possible. I will go to the hotel and collect them in person. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Allison
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them in the drawer of the desk, or on the sofa.

The papers are my tax return forms of 2021 which are
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and confidential. I need them to file my tax return by the
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of this month.
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, I will
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the penalty for late filing tax refund from the
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government
.

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me to ask Lost and Found Department to
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them. If they had found them,
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inform me by a phone call as
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as possible. I will go to the hotel and collect them in person.

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Yours
faithfully
, Allison
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IELTS letter You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter,  Say where you think you left the paper.  Explain why they also so important.  Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

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