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You recently received your grade from your instructor and you are dissatisfied with your score

You recently received your grade from your instructor and you are dissatisfied with your score 7jYb

Dear Mr. Sockman, This letter is to express my dissatisfaction with the grade that I received for my class project. I know you made it clear that individuals in each group would all receive the same grade; but I would like to ask you to reconsider your decision about my grade. I put a lot of effort into this project. I spent numerous hours in the library and at the computer working on my research. My project partner, Jack, apparently did not approach the project with the same dedication as I. Enclosed, you will find copies of my notes and sources that I used in my research. You encouraged us to speak with you if we encountered any problems within our groups, and I made two appointments with you to discuss the situation. Unfortunately, you were unable to attend either one. Considering that I did attempt to contact you, and that I put a lot of effort into this project, I hope that you will be generous enough to raise my project grade. I would like to thank you for your considerate attention in advance. Yours sincerely, S. Dent

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the computer working on my research. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
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used
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You encouraged us to speak with you if we encountered any problems within

our groups, and I made two appointments with you to discuss the situation.

Unfortunately, you were unable to attend either one. Considering that I did

attempt to contact you, and that I put This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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enough
 to raise my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskdealbusinessenterprisestrategyjob
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I would like to thank you for your considerate attention in advance.

Yours sincerely
,

S. Dent