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You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your deliveryexplain the importance of this deliveryask for a replacement it

You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your deliveryexplain the importance of this deliveryask for a replacement it bgjQ

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Bhawna Sharma, and I am writing in order to complain about the incomplete order that I received through your portal. I recently ordered a Samsung A20 mobile phone with order id ‘AM78798’ during your ongoing Diwali sale and the same was delivered to me on 22nd Oct 2019. However, when I opened the case, I found the charger missing from the accessories. Moreover, the earphones that were shipped along with the phone does not seem to be working. The mobile phone had a very special purpose as it was bought as a surprise Diwali gift for my father and the faulty delivery from your end has made all the efforts go down in vain. I am highly disappointed with this kind of service from an esteemed organization like yours. This negligence on your part has made the purchase unworth

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Possible spelling mistake found.Shawna
Bhawna
 Sharma, and I am writing in order to complain about the incomplete order that I received through your portal.

I recently ordered a Samsung A20 mobile phone with order id ‘AM78798’ during your ongoing Diwali sale and the same was delivered
 to me on 22nd Oct 2019. However
, when I opened the case, I found the charger missing from the accessories. Moreover
, the earphones that were shipped
 along with the phone does not seem to be working.

The mobile phone had a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 special purpose as it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 as a surprise Diwali gift for my father and the faulty delivery from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 has made all the efforts go down in vain. I am highly
 disappointed with this kind of service from an esteemed organization like yours. This negligence on your part has made the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphunworth.unworth!unworth?unworth:unworth,unworth;
unworth

IELTS letter You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you ordered and what was missing from your deliveryexplain the importance of this deliveryask for a replacement it

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

143 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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