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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it V1WQ
Dera Mr Smith, I am writing this letter to express my desire to work in our headquater in London for six month for further bussiness training. I am extermly deliteted I hear that our UK head office annouced a six month training seassion for five hundrard employees to reform thier working skills in marketing. I want waiting for this chance from last two years and now it has come. I believe if I get this training I will introduce myraid benefits to my company and also teach these skills to other employees in our branch. I had already consulted with my working peer Rahul and he agreed to take care of my project and assingments in my absence. After returing back to office i will do overtime and putt my all efforts to cafchup everything i missed in six month period. I want you to support me and allow me to work for six month in our head office in London. For my transfer to UK I need your constent and your signature of application. I will be very greatfull to you if you may do this favour to me. I look towards your positive response. Yours faithfully, Taranbir Singh.
Dera
Mr Smith,

I am writing this letter to express my desire to work in our
headquater
in London for six
month
for
further
bussiness
training.

I am
extermly
deliteted
I hear that our UK head office
annouced
a six
month
training
seassion
for five
hundrard
employees to reform
thier
working
skills
in marketing.
I
want waiting for this chance from last two years and
now
it has
come
.
I
believe if I
get
this training I will introduce
myraid
benefits to my
company
and
also
teach these
skills
to other employees in our branch.

I
had already consulted with my working peer
Rahul and
he
agreed
to take care of my project and
assingments
in my absence. After
returing
back to office
i
will do overtime and putt my all efforts to
cafchup
everything
i
missed in six
month
period.

I want you to support me and
allow
me to work for six
month
in our head office in London. For my transfer to UK I need your
constent
and your signature of application. I will be
very
greatfull
to you if you may do this
favour
to me.

I look towards your
positive
response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Taranbir
Singh.
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IELTS letter You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

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  American English
8 paragraphs
200 words
5.5
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