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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you GBVw
Dear sansa, How’re you? It’s been two months since we met. Today, I’m writing this letter to tell you about something exciting and adventurous. Let me explain, Last time I told you about my trip to Spain to meet my college friend. There I attended the world famous la tomatina festival. I’m sure whether you’re aware or not but It’s a national festival of Spain. He invited me to the same event. It’s a game where everyone throws tomatoes on each-other. It was such a unique and bizarre experience for me. I think you’ll like the festival because it’s not only a festival but also a great chance to mingle with locals. People welcome every visitor with an open arm. I’m quite sure you’ll enjoy it. I’m planning to go there again next month. You should come if you want to experience something new and eccentric. I have booked two tickets in advance. We can spend some quality time together. I’ll wait for you reply Regards Lennister
Dear
sansa
,

How’re you? It’s been two months since we met.
Today
, I’m writing this letter to
tell
you about something exciting and adventurous.

Let
me
explain
, Last time I
told
you about my trip to Spain to
meet
my college friend. There I attended the world
famous
la
tomatina
festival
. I’m sure whether you’re aware or not
but
It’s a national
festival
of Spain. He invited me to the same
event
. It’s a game where everyone throws tomatoes on each-other.

It was such a unique and bizarre experience for me. I
think
you’ll like the
festival
because
it’s not
only
a
festival
but
also
a great chance to mingle with locals.
People
welcome every visitor with an open arm. I’m quite sure you’ll enjoy it.

I’m planning to go there again
next
month. You should
come
if you want to experience something new and eccentric. I have booked two tickets in advance. We can spend
some
quality time together.

I’ll wait for you reply

Regards

Lennister
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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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