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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 1. You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some issues with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: • Explain why you took the job. • Describe the issues that you experienced. • Suggest what could be done about them. Begin the letter as follows: Dear ......, (Write the letter in 20 minutes and above 150 words).

1. You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some issues with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: • Explain why you took the job. • Describe the issues that you experienced. • Suggest what could be done about them. Begin the letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . , (Write the letter in 20 minutes and above 150 words). yy83
¬¬Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to make you aware of an issue which I am facing lately. I took this work from home job as I have a 8 months old daughter whom I don’t want to leave in day care/baby sitting. I want to take care of her by myself beside not compromising with my career. When I read about your requirement of an accountant who can work from home, I was overwhelmed. It was like a dream come true for me. I found what I was looking for. But lately I am facing some issues while coordinating with the invoicing department. I tried sorting it out on my own without getting you involved but it ssems as if my requests are being ignored by the Invoicing team. I would like to bring to your notice that Invoicing team are not sending the invoices clearly which is making it diificult for me to enter the item in our database. As we work on FIFO method, it might affect our stock counting at the end of the month. I have requested several times via official email to the invoicing team head Mr. Will to ask his team to send the invoices so that it is visible clearly. Its been 15 days now but my request are seem to be ignored. It is very diificult for me to read the item listed on it and I am unable to feed the data in the system. I would like to request you to change the scanner and install a good quality scanner to avoid this problem and also request you to ask the Invoicing team head Mr. Will to communicate with me instead of ignoring my emails. Your prompt action in this matter will be highly appreciated. Yours faithfully Ankita
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¬¬Dear
Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
you aware of an issue which I am facing lately. I took this work from home job as I have
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
8 months
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old
daughter whom I don’t want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
in day care/baby sitting.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to take care of her by myself beside not compromising with my career. When I read about your requirement of an accountant who can work from home, I
was overwhelmed
. It was like a dream
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come
true for me. I found what I was looking for.

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But
lately I am facing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
issues while coordinating with the
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invoicing
department. I tried sorting it out on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
without getting you involved
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but
it
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ssems
as if my
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requests
are being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ignored
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Invoicing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
. I would like to bring to your notice that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Invoicing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
are not sending the invoices
clearly
which is making it
Possible spelling mistake found.
diificult
for me to enter the item in our database. As we work on FIFO method, it might affect our stock counting at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the month. I have requested several times via official email to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
invoicing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
head Mr. Will to ask his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the invoices
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that it is visible
clearly
.
Did you mean "It's" (="It has") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
been 15 days
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now
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but
my
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request
are
Consider using a past participle here: "seemed".
seem
to be
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ignored
.

It is
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very
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diificult
for me to read the item listed on
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it and
I am unable to feed the data in the system. I would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
request
you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the scanner and install a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
quality scanner to avoid this problem and
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
request
you to ask the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Invoicing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
team
head Mr. Will to communicate with me
instead
of ignoring my emails.

Your prompt action in this matter will be
highly
appreciated.

Yours
faithfully


Ankita
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IELTS letter 1. You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some issues with the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter: • Explain why you took the job. • Describe the issues that you experienced. • Suggest what could be done about them. Begin the letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . , (Write the letter in 20 minutes and above 150 words).

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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