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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter • tell your friend what the event was • explain why you think your friend would like the event • invite him to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter • tell your friend what the event was • explain why you think your friend would like the event • invite him to come to the event with you 28Y6
Dear Max, I am writing to you to invite you to an art exhibition. Recently I have visited The Museum Of Modern Art. They eventually exhibit all Claude Monet’s most famous paintings. As you know I’m not an art connoisseur but even I was stunned by these pieces of art. In fact all of his pictures are masterpieces. There is no doubt in my mind that you will be delighted with the exposition. Firstly, admission to the expo is free. Secondly, as you are keen on impressionism and it’s philosophy the founder of French impressionist painting and his works will certainly intrigue you. Thirdly, they have audio guides allowing all the visitors to listen to Monet’s biography and the history of creation of all his pictures. You definitely should go with me to this amazing exhibition on the 13-th of March. We should get up early and be there at 8: 00 am because line for entrance is really huge. Everybody wants to touch the beautiful and great art. Looking forward to your response. Best wishes, Evgeniya
Dear Max,

I am writing to you to invite you to an
art
exhibition.

Recently I have visited The Museum Of Modern
Art
. They
eventually
exhibit all Claude Monet’s most
famous
paintings. As you know I’m not an
art
connoisseur
but
even I
was stunned
by these pieces of
art
. In fact all of his pictures are masterpieces.

There is no doubt in my mind that you will
be delighted
with the exposition.
Firstly
, admission to the expo is free.
Secondly
, as you are keen on impressionism and it’s philosophy the founder of French impressionist painting and his works will
certainly
intrigue you.
Thirdly
, they have audio guides allowing all the visitors to listen to Monet’s biography and the history of creation of all his pictures.

You definitely should
go with
me to this amazing exhibition on the 13-th of March. We should
get
up early and be there at 8: 00 am
because
line for entrance is
really
huge. Everybody wants to touch the
beautiful
and great art.

Looking forward to your response.

Best wishes,

Evgeniya
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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter • tell your friend what the event was • explain why you think your friend would like the event • invite him to come to the event with you

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