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You have just been offered a place on short training course in a small seaside town where a friend of yours is living. Write a letter to your friend

You have just been offered a place on short training course in a small seaside town where a friend of yours is living. Write a letter to your friend YnPm
Dear Krishnan, How are you? I hope you are doing well. I have some exciting news! I've just been accepted on the hotel management training course run by your local college. It's a 3-month course which involves visiting the tourist sites in your area. That' gr8, of course, but what I'm most excited about is being able to spend some time with you exploring your town. I've never lived in a seaside town before so I am keen to find out what life is like there. I imagine the people are really friendly. But what about entertainment? What kind of things do you most like to do around town? And are there any interesting places to visit nearby? One thing's for sure: I love Seafood, so I'll be spending a lot of my time in the local restaurants. The only problem is I'm so excited I can't wait to visit you before the course starts in Sep. I know usually you take your holidays in July, but you might be planning to go away then. If that's the case, could you let me know of another time we can get together? Really looking forward looking to you. Thanks, Ajit.
Dear
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Krishnan
,

How are you? I hope you are doing well. I have
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some
exciting news!
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I
've
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been
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on the hotel management training
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course
run by your local college. It's a 3-month
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course
which involves visiting the tourist sites in your area. That' gr8, of
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course
,
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but
what I'm most excited about is being able to spend
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some
time with you exploring your town.

I've never
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lived
in a seaside town
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before
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so
I am keen to find out what life is like there. I imagine the
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people
are
really
friendly.
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But
what about entertainment? What kind of things do you most like to do around town? And are there any interesting places to visit nearby? One thing's for sure: I
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love
Seafood,
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so
I'll be spending
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a lot of
my time in the local restaurants.

The
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only
problem is I'm
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so
excited I can't wait to visit you
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before
the
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course
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starts
in Sep. I know
usually
you take your holidays in July,
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but
you might be planning to go away then. If that's the case, could you
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let
me know of another time we can
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get
together?
Really
looking
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forward looking
to you.

Thanks,
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Ajit
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IELTS letter You have just been offered a place on short training course in a small seaside town where a friend of yours is living. Write a letter to your friend

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  American English
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199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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