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You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice

You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice x6V1

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to the recent notice that has been issued from the community center. We were informed that we would not be able practice in the community hall hereafter in our alloted days, due to change in schedule for the JB group. Our group is known as the "Nation Builders", we are working under the western NGO. This group has been performing for a cause all around the world and has brought music into everyone's heart by creating a purpose in their life. This community where we are performing every week is our home ground and we have disabled people and other physically challenged people, attending this practice sessions of ours. I would appreciate, if you could alter anyother days in the week, but not to completely stop us. I would be grateful if you could loook into the matter at the earliest. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, John

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to the recent notice that has been issued
 from the community center. We were informed
 that we would not be able practice in the community hall hereafter in our Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "allotted", the past tense form of the verb 'allot'?allottedallowedalloyedballoted
alloted
 days, due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in schedule for the JB group.

Our group is known
 as the Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
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Nation BuildersUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
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, we are working under the western NGO. This group has been performing for a cause all around the world and has brought music into everyone's heart by creating a purpose in their life.

This community where we are performing every week is our home Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).ground, and
ground and
 we have disabled This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and other physically
 challenged This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, attending this practice sessions of ours.

I would appreciate, if you could alter Possible spelling mistake found.anotherany other
anyother
 days in the week, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not to completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 us. I would be grateful if you could Possible spelling mistake found.LouislookLouieLoeweLoewsLoewi
loook
 into the matter at the earliest. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours Sincerely
,

John