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You recently had something delivered to your home. You now realize that the person who delivered it damaged something in your home while they were delivering the item. Write a letter to manager of the delivery company to explain the problem.

You recently had something delivered to your home. You now realize that the person who delivered it damaged something in your home while they were delivering the item. Write a letter to manager of the delivery company to explain the problem. N5rN
Dear Sir/ Madam, This is Anahita Dakhili and I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with a recent service I got from your company. On May 12th I had an armchair delivered to my home using the service of your company. I chose your company on my neighbor’s recommendation as she had already experienced a rewarding service from your company. However, to my disappointment, as soon as your employees left my place, I found my precious antique sculpture on the table next to where your employees put the armchair broken. This statue was a relic from a 12-th century artisan and was worth a fortune. Frankly speaking, words are incapable of expressing the sheer sadness I feel for the mishap and the irreparable loss. Yet, I have corresponded with my insurance company and askd them to contact you to let you know about possible ways I would like to be indemnified. I appreciate your cooperation in advance and look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, A. D.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

This is
Anahita
Dakhili and
I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with a recent service I
got
from your
company
. On May 12th I had an armchair delivered to my home using the service of your
company
. I chose your
company
on my neighbor’s recommendation as she had already experienced a rewarding service from your
company
.

However
, to my disappointment, as
soon
as your employees
left
my place, I found my precious antique sculpture on the table
next
to where your employees put the armchair broken. This statue was a relic from a 12-th century artisan and was worth a fortune.

Frankly
speaking, words are incapable of expressing the sheer sadness I feel for the mishap and the irreparable loss.
Yet
, I have corresponded with my insurance
company
and
askd
them to contact you to
let
you know about possible ways I would like to
be indemnified
.

I appreciate your cooperation in advance and look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

A. D.
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IELTS letter You recently had something delivered to your home. You now realize that the person who delivered it damaged something in your home while they were delivering the item. Write a letter to manager of the delivery company to explain the problem.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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