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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear Madam, My name is Viral KORAT, and recently I have attended one your concerts in my town Seurat. I am writing this letter to apprise you about the singer I liked the most in the concert. Last week, when I was reading a newspaper, I came to know that the great Bollywood singer Sheryl Goal and her team were performing in our city. Promptly I booked the tickets for the concert. T felt very proud after attending your concerts. I liked the each singer, but the one who made me fan of his singing is Aridity Singh. He has very sweet and pure voice, which can make anyone happy. I am also learning the music. I go regularly to learn different musical instruments in my school. I play guitar, piano, and flute. In addition, I have recorded few videos of mine singing. It would be my pleasure if you can give some valuable feedback on my recorded albums, which would aid me to improve my skills in future. If you can give me your email address, then I can send my videos. Look forward to hear valuable feedbacks from you. Thank you for your time and considerations! Yours faithfully, Viral Korat
Dear Madam,

My name is Viral
KORAT
, and recently I have attended one your concerts in my town Seurat. I am writing this letter to apprise you about the singer I liked the most in the concert.

Last week, when I was reading a newspaper, I came to know that the great Bollywood singer Sheryl Goal and her team were performing in our city.
Promptly
I booked the tickets for the concert. T felt
very
proud after attending your concerts. I liked
the each
singer,
but
the one who made me fan of his singing is Aridity Singh. He has
very
sweet and pure voice, which can
make
anyone happy.

I am
also
learning the music. I go
regularly
to learn
different
musical instruments in my school.
I
play guitar, piano, and flute.
In addition
, I have recorded few videos of mine singing.

It would be my pleasure if you can give
some
valuable feedback on my recorded albums, which would aid me to
improve
my
skills
in future
. If you can give me your email address, then I can
send
my videos.

Look forward
to hear
valuable feedbacks from you. Thank you for your time and considerations!

Yours
faithfully
,

Viral
Korat
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IELTS letter You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

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  American English
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201 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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