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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities oJ8D
Dear Mr Ben, I am writing this about your singing in concert last Saturday. I was going to Royal Hall in last Saturday. And sidhu moosewala show watching. There was very crowd. When I going the show must already start. The people enjoyed Sidhu Moosewala songs. I feeling very well. I love music. I already joining music class because music is my passion. I am going to music classes every day. I am big fan of Moosewala. I receive a music composition by Sidhu Moosewala. His composition was very good. And he is a very good singer. He is help my music carrier. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Martin
Dear Mr Ben, I am writing this about your singing in concert last Saturday. I was going to Royal Hall in last Saturday. And
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sidhu
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moosewala
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watching. There was
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crowd.
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When
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I going
the
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show
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must
already
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start
. The
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people
enjoyed
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Sidhu
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Moosewala
songs.
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I feeling
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very
well. I
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love
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
.
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I
already joining
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music
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class
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because
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music
is my passion.
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I
am going to
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music
classes every day.
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I
am
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big
fan of
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Moosewala
.
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I
receive a
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music
composition by
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Sidhu
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Moosewala
. His composition was
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very
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good
. And he is a
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very
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good
singer. He is
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help
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
music
carrier. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
, Martin

IELTS letter You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

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  American English
2 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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