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You order a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you,, ordered it and you still have not received, your order. Write letter to the e-commerce company about this

You order a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you, , ordered it and you still have not received, your order. Write letter to the e-commerce company about this k7b2
Respected Sir, Here I want to inform about my last order on 13th January as you, know today is 20th January passed one week and I have not received my order till now. In addition, I will be in the ordered science book for 10th class addition 4. It is essential to me owing to the fact that my exams are near about apart from this I have less time for preparation and may be March my exam will be started however 70% content are available in this book. Furthermore, I want you check the order list and verify that are you send me book or not? If you send me than check the track and send me information about it and if not then please send it by hand owing to the fact that by posting it consume more time as my exams are near and I need it and if you can not do anything then deposit my payment back to my account. From another perspective I hope you understand my problem and please send me book as in the near future as possible. Your sincere Sandeep,
Respected Sir, Here I want to inform about my last order on 13th January as you, know
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today
is 20th January passed one week and I have not received my order till
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now
.
In addition
, I will be in the ordered science
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book
for 10th
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class
addition 4. It is essential to me owing to the fact that my exams are near about apart from this I have less time for preparation and may be March my exam will be
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started
however
70% content are available in this
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book
.
Furthermore
, I want you
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check
the order list and verify that are you
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send
me
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book
or not? If you
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send
me than
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check
the
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track
and
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send
me information about it and if not then
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please
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
send
it by hand owing to the fact that by posting it consume more time as my exams are near and I need it and if you can not do anything then deposit my payment back to my account. From another perspective I hope you understand my problem and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
send
me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
as in the near future as possible. Your sincere Sandeep,

IELTS letter You order a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you, , ordered it and you still have not received, your order. Write letter to the e-commerce company about this

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  American English
1 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
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