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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details of the course you took at the university. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details of the course you took at the university. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply mNLK
Dear Anxony, I hope you’re doing fantastic. I’m glad to know that you’re planning for your further studies and thanks for reaching out to me regarding suggestion about the course I completed at Guru Nanak Dev University. As you know that I was so fascinated by computer networks, so ‘Master in Computer Applications’ was the best suited course for me, which I completed in the batch of 2015 to 2018. Initially, it seemed to be a basic study but, to my surprise, it turned out to be so knowledgeable and updated as concerned to be progressive with the world as current key to success in any field is technology. While talking about the university, the way it delivers the deep practical and on-shore knowledge of the coursework to their students is impeccable. Another edge over the other institutions is its friendly tutors, who are always available to guide. Moreover, as i know about you, vast botanical gardens have always been your weakness; and you will be able to complete your assignments in the parks of campus while accessing the free wifi all over. And, do fill out the scholarship form available online before applying for admission test and attach along your bachelor degree’s transcripts as you may get about fifty percent discount on tuition fees of the course because of the marks you achieved in your graduation. Hope to see you soon after your admission and we will have a lot of fun as its been ages we haven’t met. Love, John
Dear
Anxony
,

I hope you’re doing fantastic. I’m glad to know that you’re planning for your
further
studies and thanks for reaching out to me regarding suggestion about the course I completed at Guru Nanak Dev University.

As you know that I was
so
fascinated by computer networks,
so
‘Master in Computer Applications’ was the best suited course for me, which I completed in the batch of 2015 to 2018.
Initially
, it seemed to be a basic study
but
, to my surprise, it turned out to be
so
knowledgeable and updated as concerned to be progressive with the world as
current
key to success in any field is technology.

While talking about the university, the way it delivers the deep practical and on-shore knowledge of the coursework to their students is impeccable. Another edge over the other institutions is its friendly tutors, who are always available to guide.
Moreover
, as
i
know about you, vast botanical gardens have always been your weakness; and you will be able to complete your assignments in the parks of campus while accessing the free
wifi
all over.

And, do fill out the scholarship form available online
before
applying for admission
test
and attach along your bachelor degree’s transcripts as you may
get
about fifty percent discount on tuition fees of the course
because
of the marks you achieved in your graduation.

Hope to
see
you
soon
after your
admission and
we will have
a lot of
fun as
its
been ages we haven’t met.

Love
, John
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IELTS letter A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details of the course you took at the university. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply

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251 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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