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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details of the course you took at the university. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply

A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details of the course you took at the university. Explain why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply mNLK

Dear Anxony, I hope you’re doing fantastic. I’m glad to know that you’re planning for your further studies and thanks for reaching out to me regarding suggestion about the course I completed at Guru Nanak Dev University. As you know that I was so fascinated by computer networks, so ‘Master in Computer Applications’ was the best suited course for me, which I completed in the batch of 2015 to 2018. Initially, it seemed to be a basic study but, to my surprise, it turned out to be so knowledgeable and updated as concerned to be progressive with the world as current key to success in any field is technology. While talking about the university, the way it delivers the deep practical and on-shore knowledge of the coursework to their students is impeccable. Another edge over the other institutions is its friendly tutors, who are always available to guide. Moreover, as i know about you, vast botanical gardens have always been your weakness; and you will be able to complete your assignments in the parks of campus while accessing the free wifi all over. And, do fill out the scholarship form available online before applying for admission test and attach along your bachelor degree’s transcripts as you may get about fifty percent discount on tuition fees of the course because of the marks you achieved in your graduation. Hope to see you soon after your admission and we will have a lot of fun as its been ages we haven’t met. Love, John

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 all over.

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test
 and attach along your bachelor degree’s transcripts as you may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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because
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see
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soon
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a lot of
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 been ages we haven’t met.

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Love
, John