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Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, say why you want to sell your car describe the condition of the car invite the friend to come and see the car himself/herself someday

Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, say why you want to sell your car describe the condition of the car invite the friend to come and see the car himself/herself someday N9y2

Dear Ron, I hope this letter finds you well. It has been a couple of months since we have not met and my child was remembering you the other day. I was planning to auction my vehicle. There is a good offer going on Mercedes cars in my locality and they have a special edition of sports collection. As you know I am fond of these models and had a desire for a long time to have them in the garage. Finally, I have decided to go for it. My Honda City 2017 as you know is blue in colour and still looks brand new. I have recently changed the battery and lubricants. There is a sunroof and automatic lock system. Also, there is no accident reported till date and there is no scratch around the car. I have done all servicing from the showroom itself and therefore all parts are running smoothly. I am having a dinner party on Sunday 13th this month for Vivaan birthday and would like to invite you for the same. Also, at the same time I can show you the car and we can go for a test drive. Do let me know, if you plan to come. See you soon, Deepak Waja

Dear Ron, I hope this letter finds you well. It has been a couple of months since we have not met and my child The verb 'remembering' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
was remembering
 you the other day. I was planning to auction my vehicle. There is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 offer going on Mercedes cars in my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).locality, and
locality and
 they have a special edition of sports collection. As you know I am fond of these models and had a desire for a long time to have them in the garage. Finally
, I have decided to go for it. My Honda City 2017 as you know is A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.blue
blue in colour
 and still
 looks brand new. I have recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 the battery and lubricants. There is a sunroof and automatic lock system. Also
, there is no accident reported till date and there is no scratch around the car. I have done all servicing from the showroom itself and therefore
 all parts are running smoothly
. I am having a dinner party on Sunday 13th this month for Possible spelling mistake found.VivianViva an
Vivaan
 birthday and would like to invite you for the same. Also
, at the same time I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 you the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).car, and
car and
 we can go for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 drive. Do This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me knowIf " if" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it. if
, if
 you plan to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
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