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Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund.

Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund. BRYp
Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regard to online purchase of SAMSUNG Galaxy m50 smartphone on your website. Its a Radiant blue mobile with configuration of 128 giga bytes memory and 6 giga bytes Ram. Let me explain my situation, from day one the mobile showed a lot of issues. On unboxing the phone was not properly packed, other than that it always gets heat up by short use, It is difficult to hold the phone on many occasion moreover it has very poor battery backup for a new phone. It get's difficult to connect with wifi on occasions. overall I had a very unpleasant experience with my new buy. Would you kindly refund the money. I am not quite sure if I want to use the mobile from the same company. I found there mobiles not very well made. So I have dropped the idea of exchange and also a new mobile in same price range has been launched by apple. I am planning to buy it. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. yours faithfullysiddharth bakshi
Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regard to online
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purchase
of
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
SAMSUNG Galaxy
m50 smartphone on your website.
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Its
a Radiant blue mobile with configuration of 128
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giga
bytes memory and 6
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giga
bytes Ram.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation, from day one the mobile
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showed
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a lot of
issues. On unboxing the phone was not
properly
packed, other than that it always
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gets
heat up by short
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use
, It is difficult to hold the phone on
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many occasion
moreover
it has
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very
poor battery backup for a new phone. It
Do not use 's with a verb. Did you mean "gets"?
get's
difficult to connect with
Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)
wifi
on occasions.
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overall
I had a
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very
unpleasant experience with my new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
.

Would you kindly refund the money. I am not quite sure if I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the mobile from the same
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. I found there mobiles not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well made
.
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So
I have dropped the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of exchange and
also
a new mobile in same price range has
been launched
by apple. I am planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
it. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

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yours
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faithfullysiddharth
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bakshi
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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