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Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund.

Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund. BRYp

Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regard to online purchase of SAMSUNG Galaxy m50 smartphone on your website. Its a Radiant blue mobile with configuration of 128 giga bytes memory and 6 giga bytes Ram. Let me explain my situation, from day one the mobile showed a lot of issues. On unboxing the phone was not properly packed, other than that it always gets heat up by short use, It is difficult to hold the phone on many occasion moreover it has very poor battery backup for a new phone. It get's difficult to connect with wifi on occasions. overall I had a very unpleasant experience with my new buy. Would you kindly refund the money. I am not quite sure if I want to use the mobile from the same company. I found there mobiles not very well made. So I have dropped the idea of exchange and also a new mobile in same price range has been launched by apple. I am planning to buy it. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. yours faithfullysiddharth bakshi

Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regard to online This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 of If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Samsung Galaxy
SAMSUNG Galaxy
 m50 smartphone on your website. Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?It'sIt is
Its
 a Radiant blue mobile with configuration of 128 Possible spelling mistake found.gigRigaGinagigsGilaIGA
giga
 bytes memory and 6 Possible spelling mistake found.gigRigaGinagigsGilaIGA
giga
 bytes Ram.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my situation, from day one the mobile This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 issues. On unboxing the phone was not properly
 packed, other than that it always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 heat up by short This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
, It is difficult to hold the phone on Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: "many occasions".many occasions
many occasion
moreover
 it has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 poor battery backup for a new phone. It Do not use 's with a verb. Did you mean "gets"?gets
get's
 difficult to connect with Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)Wi-Fi
wifi
 on occasions. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
 I had a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 unpleasant experience with my new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
.

Would you kindly refund the money. I am not quite sure if I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the mobile from the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I found there mobiles not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-made
well made
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I have dropped the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of exchange and also
 a new mobile in same price range has been launched
 by apple. I am planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYours
yours
Possible spelling mistake found.
faithfullysiddharth
Possible spelling mistake found.LakshmibashBashobatshit
bakshi