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I am writing this letter about problem which I face from few days due noise issue

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In recent year individuals using social networking side. This trend put detrimental impact on both human beings and society. I strongly support this nation and I will justify my opinion in the following paragraphs. TO COMMENCE WITH, the significant impact these side have on people who spend expensive amount on this sites. young individual locked themselves in room in more hours spend most of time on this sites and playing games and chat with others These side killed families value and important.

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IELTS letter I am writing this letter about problem which I face from few days due noise issue

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

82 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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