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You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: say how you feel about his/her performance give details of your music-related activities explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities bjNW

Dear Mr. Knight, I am writing this letter to inform you that I attended one of your concerts which was held on 19th March at Rose Stadium. Your performance was amazing and I really enjoyed a lot especially the song ‘Gotta Go’. I used to listen your songs everyday and it was always my dreamt that I could see you while performing a live and I think it is fulfill now. I also want to share with you my music related activities like I used to play a piano and I also participate in singing competition every year in my school. I love to write lyrics and make compositions of my own written songs. I have written 10 songs already but I have some difficulties of making compositions. As I know that compositions of your songs are fabulous and people are also love to listen your songs. I would request you to give me some tips and tricks that how I can improve it. I would be very grateful If you help me with this. Hope to hear from you soon Yours sincerely, Preet

Dear Mr. Knight,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I attended one of your concerts which was held
 on 19th March at Rose Stadium. Your performance was amazing and I really
 enjoyed a lot especially
 the song ‘Gotta Go’. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to listen your songs 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 and it was always my dreamt that I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you while performing a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is Consider using a past participle here: "fulfilled".fulfilled
fulfill
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

I also
 want to share with you my music related activities like I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to play a piano and I also
 participate in singing competition every year in my school. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to write lyrics and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 compositions of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 written songs. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have written 10 songs already This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 difficulties of making compositions.

As I know that compositions of your songs are fabulous and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to listen your songs. I would request you to give me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 tips and tricks that how I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 it. I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphgrateful.grateful!grateful?grateful:grateful,grateful;
grateful


“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me with this.

Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon


Yours sincerely
,

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Preet