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motivation letter for textile masters

motivation letter for textile masters X68Y
As a science student through my academic life, I have always been wonderd how a scientic theory works and have come back to find out how much details it takes to research a theory in order to create a successful project based on that. This habit of questioning myself guided my decesion to study in textile engineering in graduation. Because Clothing industry in Bangladesh is in its rise and by joining this industry will allow me to work on a huge practical application of a technology. First two years of my bachelore study, I got --------. Within my syllabus knowedge I started working by opening own blog-Textileinforia. blogspot. com- with the humble goal of sharing information that accurately sketches textile technology & trade. I always tried to enlarge the knowledge through normal people, aim to make them educated & realized about the reality. Because I strongly believe that knowledge should be free to all & only knowledge has the ability solve all the complication. I feel a large number of student & textile professionals in my country are very keen to learn about textile tecchnology but for language barrier they loss interest or failed to capture the theme eagerly. So I choose to write in native language about those topics which seems to be most obscure aspects. I describe topics elaborately in the easiest way with variety of examples every time. This simple role quickly led to direct activism. I wrote about many topics about the industry such as textile fundamentals, history, international trade agreements, innovative technology, sustainable textile, non woven technology, professional goals, textile definitions with a different point of view. With the overwhelming response from people I started making same effort in videography platform by opening an youtube Channel called textile Inforia. The response was more formidable. After I graduated from bachelore I was 22, young and still eager to learn but unfortunately it appeared that there are no any future focused prescience textile study in master in my own country. Although the clothing industry was on its huge expansion and contributing heavily into the GDP. Considering circumstances, I prefer to join professionally into the industry to gain practical experience and know details about the trade. My professional experiences that I have gained are quite diversified. My first job was at Hameem group( country leading clothing manufacturer company) as production officer, where I learned a lot of practical knowedge about dyeing technology of denim fabric. However, I switched my job to coast to coast pvt. Ltd, a giant factory for making overcoat & jacket, where I got chance to develop completely new buyer, do garments costing, sourching manifold raw materials locally and internationally, negotiating with buyer before placing order. I have been setting time and action plan, supervising the sampling process, checking and justifying purchase order, LC & sales contacts, developing fabrics, trims & accessories and ensuring the test process by following buyer requirements, Handling scop chart(global certificate of compliance for producing organic & sustainable product). I always envisaged myself enjoying working on some technical and commercial activities. I always like to delve deeper into the subjects that interest me. This passion along with my hardworking ability has not only placed me in a top professional but also enabled me to gain detail knowledge of subject related to textile technology and industry. I was well on my way to become a jack of the trade. But during my work I started to realize that the knowledge I posses right now is not enough for my future development as a professional & utilization of my potential. I need to learn more about advanced management skills, advanced quality management, international trade, retail & regulations, as well as innovative textile technologies to make my career passion driven. I cannot wait to become that expert on textile trade as its my passion to research and examine large-scale international business, global economics, and modern management skills in depth. In general, I'm interested in learning how technological innovation affects all topics. I want to serve my country by being a specialist with a broad range of practical and theoretical knowledge, which is why I am confident that Hockshule University's Postgraduate program in textile management and technology program will help me to achieve my objectives. Working in to the core of Bangladesh garments business, I realized that in spite of having a various possibilities, this particular industry is still cheap labour dependent. There we have a big group of highly capable & keen to learn workforce but the industry is not being able to bring a competitive policy yet which can increase profit margin, improve product quality, enhance efficiency, insure industrial flexibility & innovation. We are now living in the age of competition in producing improved quality over cost reduction policy. A few companies out of the giant industry started the initiative to Fetch new policy. Bangladesh is the station of order driven manufacturer not the firms are forecast driven. Therefore the industry has to rely largely on intermediaries. Firms are not involved in marketing activities. Retailers & distributors dominate the demand, playing key roles, taking a big share of profit. Bangladeshi companies are gradually looking at these issues. And the industry will require a huge number of experts from different specializations related to textile trade and technology for implementing competitive policy. As a result, if I can develop the requisite skills and experience, it will be a fantastic opportunity for me to be a part of this progress and contribute to my country's textile industry.
As a science student through my academic life, I have always been
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wonderd
how a
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scientic
theory works and have
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come
back to find out how
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much
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details
it takes to research a theory in
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order
to create a successful project based on that. This habit of questioning myself guided my
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decesion
to study in
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textile
engineering in graduation.
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Because
Clothing
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industry
in Bangladesh is in its rise and by joining this
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industry
will
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allow
me to work on a huge
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practical
application of a technology.

First
two years of my
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bachelore
study, I
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got
--------. Within my syllabus
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knowedge
I
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started
working by opening
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own
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blog-Textileinforia
.
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blogspot
.
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com
- with the humble goal of sharing information that
accurately
sketches
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textile
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technology
&
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trade
. I always tried to enlarge the
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knowledge
through normal
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people
, aim to
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make
them educated & realized about the reality.
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Because
I
strongly
believe that
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knowledge
should be free to all &
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only
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knowledge
has the ability solve all the complication. I feel
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a large number of
student &
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textile
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professionals
in my
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country
are
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very
keen to
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learn
about
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textile
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tecchnology
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but
for language barrier they
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loss
interest or failed to capture the theme
eagerly
.
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So
I choose to write in native language about those
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topics
which seems to be
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most
obscure aspects. I
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describe
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topics
elaborately
in the easiest way with variety of examples every time. This simple role
quickly
led to direct activism. I wrote about
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many
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topics
about the
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industry
such as
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textile
fundamentals, history, international
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trade
agreements, innovative
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technology
, sustainable
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textile
, non woven
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technology
,
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professional
goals,
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textile
definitions with a
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different
point of view. With the overwhelming response from
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people
I
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started
making same effort in videography platform by opening
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an
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youtube
Channel called
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textile
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Inforia
. The response was more formidable.

After I graduated from
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bachelore
I was 22, young and
still
eager to
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learn
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but
unfortunately it appeared that there are
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no
any future focused prescience
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textile
study in master in my
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own
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country
. Although the clothing
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industry
was on its huge expansion and contributing
heavily
into the GDP. Considering circumstances, I prefer to
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join
professionally
into the
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industry
to gain
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practical
experience and know
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details
about the
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trade
. My
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professional
experiences that I have gained are quite diversified. My
first
job was at
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Hameem
group
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(
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country
leading clothing manufacturer
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company
) as production officer, where I learned
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a lot of
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practical
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knowedge
about dyeing
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technology
of denim fabric.
However
, I switched my job
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to coast to coast
pvt. Ltd, a giant factory for making overcoat & jacket, where I
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got
chance to develop completely new buyer, do garments costing,
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sourching
manifold raw materials
locally
and
internationally
, negotiating with buyer
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before
placing
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order
. I have been setting time and action plan, supervising the sampling process, checking and justifying
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purchase
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order
, LC & sales contacts, developing fabrics, trims & accessories and ensuring the
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test
process by following buyer requirements, Handling
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scop
chart(global certificate of compliance for producing organic & sustainable product). I always envisaged myself enjoying working on
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some
technical and commercial activities.
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I
always like to delve deeper into the subjects that interest me. This passion along with my hardworking ability has not
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only
placed me in a top
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professional
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but
also
enabled me to gain detail
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knowledge
of subject related to
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textile
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technology
and
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industry
. I was well on my way to become a jack of the
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trade
.
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But
during my work I
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started
to realize that the
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knowledge
I posses right
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now
is not
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enough
for my future development as a
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professional
& utilization of my potential. I need to
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learn
more about advanced
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management
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skills
, advanced quality
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management
, international
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trade
, retail & regulations,
as well
as innovative
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textile
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technologies
to
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make
my career passion driven. I cannot wait to become that expert on
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textile
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trade
as
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its
my passion to research and examine large-scale international business, global economics, and modern
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management
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skills
in depth.
In general
, I'm interested in learning how technological innovation affects all
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topics
. I want to serve my
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country
by being a specialist with a broad range of
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practical
and theoretical
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knowledge
, which is why I am confident that
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Hockshule
University's Postgraduate program in
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textile
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management
and
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technology
program will
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help
me to achieve my objectives.

Working in to the core of Bangladesh garments business, I realized that
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in spite of
having a various
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possibilities
, this particular
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industry
is
still
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cheap
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labour
dependent. There we have a
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big
group of
highly
capable & keen to
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learn
workforce
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but
the
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industry
is not being able to bring a competitive policy
yet
which can increase profit margin,
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improve
product quality, enhance efficiency, insure industrial flexibility & innovation. We are
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now
living in the age of competition in producing
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improved
quality over cost reduction policy. A few
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companies
out of the giant
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industry
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started
the initiative to Fetch new policy.

Bangladesh is the station of
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order
driven manufacturer not the firms are forecast driven.
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Therefore
the
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industry
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has to
rely
largely
on intermediaries. Firms are not involved in marketing activities. Retailers & distributors dominate the demand, playing key roles, taking a
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big
share of profit. Bangladeshi
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companies
are
gradually
looking at these issues. And the
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industry
will require a huge number of experts from
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different
specializations related to
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textile
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trade
and
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technology
for implementing competitive policy.
As a result
, if I can develop the requisite
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skills
and experience, it will be a fantastic opportunity for me to be a part of this progress and contribute to my country's
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textile
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industry
.

IELTS letter motivation letter for textile masters

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
921 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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