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There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan

There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park. Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter: introduce yourself describe the importance of the park say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan LQDV

Dear Sir, I am writing to inquire about the public park that is going to sell by local council. My name is Aman and I am a resident of Model Town colony, London. I am living in this area since my birth, my parents moved into this colony due to speciality of this area. This area has a huge park at the center of this colony where most of the kids, youngsters and old age people spend their majority of the time during evening. This park is very vast in land, it has many green trees and fountains. There is circular pathway around the park where most of the folk walk as well as jog. Also, it contains some rides especially for the children. However, it must be advertised in newspaper so that everyone become aware of it. They are planning to build a supermarket at this location which will effect in the living of local residents. Yours faithfully, Aman

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inquire about the public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
that is
 going to sell by local council. My name is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Aman, and
Aman and
 I am a resident of Model Town colony, London. I am living in this area since my birth, my parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 into this colony due to Possible spelling mistake. 'speciality' is British English.specialty
speciality
 of this area.

This area has a huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 at the center of this colony where most of the kids, youngsters and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 age This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 spend their majority of the time during evening. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 vast in land, it has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 green trees and fountains. There is circular pathway around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 where most of the folk walk as well
 as jog. Also
, it contains This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 rides especially
 for the children.

However
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be advertised
 in newspaper This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that everyone become aware of it. They are planning to build a supermarket at this location which will Did you mean "affect"?affect
effect
 in the living of local residents.

Yours faithfully
,

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Aman