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Write a letter to local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following: - where did you get this information, - the disadvantages of having a supermarket instead of the library, - importance of the library

Write a letter to local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following: - where did you get this information, - the disadvantages of having a supermarket instead of the library, - importance of the library W1wq
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my concern about the plan of replacement of a library in Model Town with a supermarket. I got this information from a local newspaper of our area. My name is Indroop Singh and I am a resident of Model Town, Phagwara. The library in our area is a big asset for the people. This library has been here for the past 50 years now and has benefited not only the people of our locality but also the people of the neighbouring areas. The elderly people of our community sit there for hours enjoying the latest newspapers and magazines and the children often go there to find matter for their school assignments. Our area is already very congested. A supermarket here would bring even more congestion. As it is, there are already many supermarkets in our town and people do not need another one. So, I urge you to please reconsider your plan and drop the idea of a supermarket. People need the library more than anything else. Hoping for a prompt consideration of this urgent request! Yours faithfully, XYZ
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my concern about the plan of replacement of a library in Model Town with a supermarket. I
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Indroop
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Singh and
I am a resident of Model Town,
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Phagwara
. The library in our area is a
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big
asset for the
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people
. This library has been here for the past 50 years
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now
and has benefited not
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only
the
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people
of our locality
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but
also
the
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people
of the
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neighbouring
areas. The elderly
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people
of our community sit there for hours enjoying the latest newspapers and magazines and the children
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often
go there to find matter for their school assignments.

Our area is already
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
congested. A supermarket here would bring even more congestion. As it is, there are already
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
supermarkets in our town and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
do not need another one.
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So
, I urge you to
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please
reconsider your plan and drop the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of a supermarket.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
need the library more than anything else.

Hoping for a prompt consideration of this urgent request!

Yours
faithfully
, XYZ
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IELTS letter Write a letter to local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket, you need to write the following: - where did you get this information, - the disadvantages of having a supermarket instead of the library, - importance of the library

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  American English
6 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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