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On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it and tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it and tell the insurance company what you would like them to do. daWo
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to notify you about a Watch that I have lost during our recent holiday trip to London. It's a Rolex Seamaster GMT watch, costs £1, 500 that has been lost during the trip. It was a wedding gift to me by my wife. Although it's an expensive item but it holds a special value and there are memories and sentiments attached to it. I believe the watch was lost while we were waiting in queue to get onboard to London Eye during the chaos of emergency evacuation from the site due to fire. Fortunately, I have taken travel insurance from your company and it has a lost item clause covered. Therefore, I would like to request a reimbursement of the watch value that is £1, 500 so that a replacement can be bought. My travel insurance policy cover number is TI224466. Thanking you in advance for your cooperation and assistance. Yours faithfully, Steve Jobs
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to notify you about a
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Watch
that I have
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lost
during our recent holiday trip to London.

It's a Rolex
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Seamaster
GMT
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watch
, costs £1, 500 that has been
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lost
during the trip. It was a wedding gift to me by my wife. Although it's an expensive item
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but
it holds a special value and there are memories and sentiments attached to it.

I believe the
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watch
was
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lost
while we were waiting in queue to
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get
onboard to London Eye during the chaos of emergency evacuation from the site due to fire.

Fortunately
, I have taken travel insurance from your
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company
and it has a
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lost
item clause covered.
Therefore
, I would like to request a reimbursement of the
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watch
value
that is
£1, 500
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so
that a replacement can be
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bought
. My travel insurance policy cover number is TI224466.

Thanking you in advance for your cooperation and assistance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Steve Jobs
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IELTS letter On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter describe the item you lost, explain how you lost it and tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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6.5
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