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you recently went on holidays tour for week. your friend lent you are guidebook write a latter your friend.

you recently went on holidays tour for week. your friend lent you are guidebook write a latter your friend. 9Db3
Dear Hamza, last month my office approved my annual leave for one week, which we plan to spent one-week holidays in the United Kingdom with family. Before travel to the United Kingdom I booked a travel guide who will explain us about United Kingdom culture, also we visit museums, parks and beaches, also I buy my United Kingdom guide book which is very help to me to learn more about the United Kingdom, really its good experience read travel guide its very interested and helpfully to roaming in the United Kingdom without any guide. I also suggest you if you want to visit any country for a few weeks then you should buy that country travel guide that guide book really helpful. Last day of week when we have to return to come back to our country that same day morning return that guidebook to the shopkeeper. And its totally free of cost.
Dear Hamza, last month my office approved my annual
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Kingdom with family.
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Before
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to the
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Kingdom I booked a
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who will
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explain
us about
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United
Kingdom culture,
also
we visit museums, parks and beaches,
also
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buy
my
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Kingdom
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guide
book which is
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help
to me to learn more about the
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United
Kingdom,
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its
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good
experience read
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travel
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guide
its
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very
interested and
helpfully
to roaming in the
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United
Kingdom without any
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guide
. I
also
suggest you if you want to visit any country for a few weeks then you should
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buy
that country
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travel
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guide
that
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guide
book
really
helpful. Last day of week when we
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have to
return to
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back to our country that same day morning return that guidebook to the shopkeeper. And its
totally
free of cost.

IELTS letter you recently went on holidays tour for week. your friend lent you are guidebook write a latter your friend.

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  American English
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153 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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