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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1 Ggno
Dear Ma'am/Sir I am writing to inform you that I'm so disappointed with your service, I am Rose from 28 Pasadena gardens our garbage collection days are every Tuesday and Friday every week, . however, it is the 3rd week of the month now when the last collection of rubbish happened, the garbage is so disgusting and stingy, the whole neighborhood is upset because the smell is attracting bugs and flies that cause us to become piss off, it's so gross when the insect flying around us. As a result for this unproper collection, some of the children's in our place got sick. Kindly do something to make this problem stop in the near future, Looking forward to your action. Respectfully yours, Rose
Dear Ma'am/Sir

I am writing to inform you that I'm
so
disappointed with your service, I am Rose from 28 Pasadena gardens our garbage collection days are every Tuesday and Friday every week
, .


however
, it is the 3rd week of the month
now
when the last collection of rubbish happened, the garbage is
so
disgusting and stingy, the whole neighborhood
is upset
because
the smell is attracting bugs and flies that cause us to become
piss
off, it's
so
gross when the insect flying around us.
As a result
for this
unproper
collection,
some
of the children's in our place
got
sick. Kindly do something to
make
this problem
stop
in the near future,

Looking forward to your action.

Respectfully
yours, Rose
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IELTS letter The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. v. 1

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  American English
4 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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