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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring 5DGA
Dear ThomasI’m extremely glad to hear that your coming for holidays to my region. It was a great news to my family and me. And you written that you want to stay some hotels consequently asking details about room tariff. But our aspiration is, if your staying with us we are supremely rejoice. In case if you are not comfortable then I can arrange some hotels. There are many cheapest hotels available in this city. And I have a plan what to do for 2 weeks of holidays. Here lots of ancient temples more than 3000 year old which is proved our architectural skills in ancient days, and monuments, museum, amusement parks and white sandy beach where you can relax and get chilled. Consequently for that casual dress is comfortable because here weather is always warm so when your coming that time it peek summer better to wear cotton or linen materials. And tell me what time and date your coming for that I can come and pick up and I can apply for a leave.
Dear
ThomasI
’m
extremely
glad to hear that
your
coming for holidays to my region. It was
a great news
to my family and me. And you
written
that you want to stay
some
hotels
consequently
asking
details
about room tariff.
But
our aspiration is, if
your
staying with us we are
supremely
rejoice. In case if you are not comfortable then I can arrange
some
hotels. There are
many
cheapest hotels available in this city. And I have a plan what to do for 2 weeks of holidays. Here lots of ancient temples more than 3000 year
old
which
is proved
our architectural
skills
in ancient days, and monuments, museum, amusement parks and white sandy beach where you can relax and
get
chilled.
Consequently
for that casual dress is comfortable
because
here weather is always warm
so
when
your
coming that time it peek summer better to wear cotton or linen materials. And
tell
me what time and date
your
coming for that I can
come
and pick up and I can apply for a
leave
.
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IELTS letter An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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