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An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring 5DGA

Dear ThomasI’m extremely glad to hear that your coming for holidays to my region. It was a great news to my family and me. And you written that you want to stay some hotels consequently asking details about room tariff. But our aspiration is, if your staying with us we are supremely rejoice. In case if you are not comfortable then I can arrange some hotels. There are many cheapest hotels available in this city. And I have a plan what to do for 2 weeks of holidays. Here lots of ancient temples more than 3000 year old which is proved our architectural skills in ancient days, and monuments, museum, amusement parks and white sandy beach where you can relax and get chilled. Consequently for that casual dress is comfortable because here weather is always warm so when your coming that time it peek summer better to wear cotton or linen materials. And tell me what time and date your coming for that I can come and pick up and I can apply for a leave.

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’m extremely
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your
 coming for holidays to my region. It was Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "great news".great news
a great news
 to my family and me. And you Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "wrote"?wrote
written
 that you want to stay This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 hotels consequently
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details
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But
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your
 staying with us we are supremely
 rejoice. In case if you are not comfortable then I can arrange This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 hotels. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 cheapest hotels available in this city. And I have a plan what to do for 2 weeks of holidays. Here lots of ancient temples more than 3000 year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 which is proved
 our architectural This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 in ancient days, and monuments, museum, amusement parks and white sandy beach where you can relax and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 chilled. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Consequently,
Consequently
 for that casual dress is comfortable This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 here weather is always warm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 when Did you mean "you're" or "you are"?you'reyou are
your
 coming that time it peek summer better to wear cotton or linen materials. And This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me what time and date Did you mean "you're" or "you are"?you'reyou are
your
 coming for that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and pick up and I can apply for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
. 

IELTS letter An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

176 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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