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You recently went on holiday and your friend lent you a travel guidebook.

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Dear Amanda, I hope you and your family is doing well in this pandemic Situation. I am writing this letter specially to thank you for lending me that Travel guide Book, as you Know i went Maldives last month and it was the best vacation i ever took in my life. Me and my family enjoy all the places, while relaxing in the velvety beach. All thanks to your book we were able to visit many alluring places while creating best memories. Do you remember that restaurant in the second page of the book. we went there, seriously their food are mesmerizing. I also bought some gifts and pile of Photos of all those breathtaking places that in the book. Amanda, far as i know you also planing to visit Maldives next month. So i will send you that useful book in a Currier service with securely packed so no damage will occurs to the book. I will handover it to service tomorrow and you will get it in two days. Again thank you so much and stay safe. Yours Faithfully, Isu.

Dear Amanda, I hope you and your family is doing well in this pandemic Situation. I am writing this letter specially
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, as you Know Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 went Maldives last month and it was the best vacation Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 ever took in my life. When referring to yourself and somebody else, put their name first. Also check whether the nominative form "I" is required here.I
Me
 and my family enjoy all the places, while relaxing in the velvety beach. All thanks to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
 we were able to visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 alluring places while A determiner is probably missing here: "creating the best".creating the best
creating best
 memories. Do you remember that restaurant in the second page of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 went there, seriously
 their food are mesmerizing. I also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
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some
 gifts and pile of Photos of all those breathtaking places that in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
. Amanda, far as Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 know you also
 planing to visit Maldives next
 month. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
Did you mean "I"?I
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 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you that useful You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
 in a Currier service with securely
 packed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 no damage will occurs to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
. I will The word 'handover' is a noun. Did you mean the verb "hand over"?hand over
handover
 it to service tomorrow and you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it in two days. Again thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much and stay safe. Yours Faithfully
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