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Dear Suzy, I am excited and elated to know that you are coming to my place for a visit and spend some time here. Unfortunately, I want to apologise that i will not be able to meet you. I have been assigned a very important project from my office and i will be extremely busy during that period from 20th August till 31st August, which are similar to your visit dates. Although if it’s possible for you to reschedule your visit during mid October then it would be great, as there are lots of festivals coming during that period and as far as i know you, You will definitely have a ball of a time. Once again, sincere apologies for asking you to change your plans, but you will definitely going to have much more fun if you come later. Eagerly waiting for your reply. With Love, Rahul
Dear Suzy,

I
am excited
and elated to know that you are coming to my place for a visit and spend
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some
time here. Unfortunately, I want to
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
that
Did you mean "I"?
i
will not be able to
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meet
you.

I have
been assigned
a
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very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
project from my office and
Did you mean "I"?
i
will be
extremely
busy during that period from 20th August till 31st August, which are similar to your visit dates.

Although if it’s possible for you to reschedule your visit during mid October then it would be great, as there are lots of festivals coming during that period and as far as
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
know you, You will definitely have a ball of a time.

Once again, sincere apologies for asking you to
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change
your plans,
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but
you will definitely
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "go"
going
to have much more fun if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
later.
Eagerly
waiting for your reply.

With
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Love
,

Rahul
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend, apologizing for asking to change date of visit

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
147 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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