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Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a small picnic. Include the following in your letter:

Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a small picnic. Include the following in your letter: kxbaK
Hi Rajat, It's been long, that we have not go out together anywhere since last year, so it's time of get together. I have planned to go out with you and our friend mukesh for small picnic. After ponder so much, I came to the conclusion that we should go out for Sukhna Lake, this weekend. We have not seen this before but heard a lot about this and assuming this would be better place to go for a Picnic. This lake is very beautiful located in sector 14, Chandigarh. Even, I searched the about weather condition in the Sukhna Lake at that particular days, Believe me, weather report shows perfectly fine. apart from this, I booked tickets of you as well as mukesh. They were not expensive and seats are not confirmed yet but will be confirmed soon. As I have done everything from my side, I just need some help from you to bring some eatables and blankets for the night travelling. It would be better if you can bring your brother's camera along with you so that, we can capture some unforgettable beautiful moments. I look forward to hearing from you as soon to confirmation out our trip. Your Best Friend, Mohit.
Hi
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Rajat
,

It's been long, that we have not
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go
out together anywhere since last year,
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so
it's time of
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get
together. I have planned to go out with you and our friend
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mukesh
for
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small
picnic.

After ponder
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so
much, I came to the conclusion that we should go out for
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Sukhna
Lake, this weekend. We have not
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seen
this
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before
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but
heard a lot about this and assuming this would be better place to go for a Picnic. This lake is
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very
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beautiful
located in sector 14, Chandigarh.

Even, I searched the about weather condition in the
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Sukhna
Lake at that particular days, Believe me, weather report
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shows
perfectly
fine.
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apart
from this, I booked tickets of you
as well
as
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mukesh
. They were not expensive and seats are not confirmed
yet
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but
will
be confirmed
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soon
.

As I have done everything from my side, I
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just
need
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some
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help
from you to bring
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some
eatables and blankets for the night travelling. It would be better if you can bring your brother's camera along with you
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so
that, we can capture
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some
unforgettable
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beautiful
moments.

I look forward to hearing from you as
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soon
to confirmation out our trip.

Your Best Friend,

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Mohit
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about your plans to go out with him/her and another friend on a small picnic. Include the following in your letter:

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  American English
8 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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