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letter to your friend tell your experience when you have to live in far from home

letter to your friend tell your experience when you have to live in far from home GLr0e

Dear Maria, Today I'm writing this letter for you to inform you that I have to change my address. As you known that I'm living Royal City but somethings happened that make me have to move out of there. Don't worry, I'm still good but it's just have a little sad when I have to leave you. So when I found the place to settle down I wrote a letter for you immediately. Now I'm living in America with my family and have a great time in here. I met a lot of friends and learned a lot of things in here. Although I had a little trouble at first because of the language gap but after lived here for 3 months now I can go outside alone and also communicate with others people normally. However I still have a few of mistakes sometimes but my life quite great. Honestly, I still want to live in our country because it's the place where I was born and it's also has a lot of memories. I wish I could go home soon to see you and we can hang out with each other. When I come home, I promise I will bring for you a lots of souvenia which I bought in here so remember to wait me. We will have a great time together when I back Your closest friend, Karen

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have to
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change
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known
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but
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make
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have to
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move
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good
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but
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just
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little
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have to
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leave
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 of friends and learned a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpieceareafieldportionpartproperty
lot
 of things in here. Although I had a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
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because
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but
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lived
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now
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people
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sometimes
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but
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, I still
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live
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because
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 and it's also
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lot
 of memories. I wish I could go home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
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see
 you and we can hang out with each other. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 home, I promise I will bring for you a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoodles
lots
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souvenia
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
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so
 remember to wait me. We will have a great time together when I back Your closest friend, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphKaren.Karen!Karen?Karen:Karen,Karen;
Karen