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You borrowed some boos from your college. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative. Write a letter to the library.

You borrowed some boos from your college. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative. Write a letter to the library. 2K63b
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Robert who is a student of third year accounting and finance class. Before two weeks I borrowed two books named finance strategies and accounting principles and due date was last Wednesday. I want to inform you that I was unable to handover these books on time because my aunt was sick and I had to visit her suddenly. She lives in Monaragala which is a rural city and 250Kms away from my town. She do not have any children and therefore I have to look after her until she feels better. I kindly request from you to do not charge any penalty for this unexpected situation. Additionaly, I will be able to handover both books on first week of next month. Please be good enough to retain my membership card. Appreciate your kind support in this regard. Thank youYours faithfullyRobert Smith
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Robert who is a student of third year accounting and finance
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Before
two weeks I borrowed two books named finance strategies and accounting principles and due date was last Wednesday.

I want to inform you that I was unable to handover these books on time
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because
my aunt was sick and I had to visit her
suddenly
. She
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lives
in
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Monaragala
which is a rural city and 250Kms away from my town. She
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do
not have any children and
therefore
I
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have to
look after her until she feels better.

I kindly request from you to do not charge any penalty for this unexpected situation.
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Additionaly
, I will be able to handover both books on
first
week of
next
month.
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Please
be
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good
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enough
to retain my membership card. Appreciate your kind support in this regard.

Thank
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youYours
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faithfullyRobert
Smith
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IELTS letter You borrowed some boos from your college. Unfortunately you have to go away to visit a sick relative. Write a letter to the library.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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