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write a letter to your landlord for not increasing the rent

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Dear Mr Pandey, I’m writing you this letter in connection with the rent that you are planning to raise. I have been living in this rented accommodation for last 2 years. As a tenant, I have paid the rents timely without any reminders. I have also been maintaining and keeping your house neat and tidy and have never complained for anything. Furthermore, you are aware about the current covid situation, the market is grappling with uncertainty, Many companies have sacked their employees and people are losing their jobs. As a result of tough market, even my company is considering not to give bonus to the employees this time. In spite of all this, if you have made up your mind to hike the rent, then I will be left with no option, but to start looking for an alternative place. Hence request you to reconsider your decision on the rent. Hope to look forward for a positive outcome. Best regards, Rahul Sharma
Dear Mr
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Pandey
,

I’m writing you this letter in connection with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rent
that you are planning to raise.

I have been living in this rented accommodation for last 2 years. As a tenant, I have paid the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rents
timely without any reminders. I have
also
been maintaining and keeping your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
neat and tidy and have never
The usual collocation for "complained" is "about" not "for". Did you mean "complained about"?
complained for
anything.

Furthermore
, you are aware about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid
situation, the market is grappling with uncertainty,
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Many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
have sacked their employees and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are losing their jobs.
As a result
of tough market, even my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
is considering not to give bonus to the employees this time.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
In spite of
all this, if you have made up your mind to hike the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rent
, then I will be
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left
with no option,
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but
to
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start
looking for an alternative place.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Hence
request you to reconsider your decision on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rent
. Hope to look forward for a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
outcome.

Best regards,

Rahul Sharma
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IELTS letter write a letter to your landlord for not increasing the rent

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  American English
7 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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