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You recently went on a business trip and stayed in a hotel. Upon your return home, you realised you left some things at the hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager stating, the details of your stay, the items you left behind, what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding some items i left at the hotel. I stayed in the executive suite 12A for a business trip which lasted 5 days starting from 12th January to 16th January 2021. When i checked out, i was rushing to the airport so as not to miss my flight which led to forgetting some items in my room. The items left behind are my apple Macbook and some important work files. Both are very important due to the fact that they contain important and confidential information regarding my job. I would be grateful if you can send them to the address i listed on my hotel book. I would gladly pay for extra cost. Thank you for your assistance. Yours Faithfully, Raimi Azeezat
Dear Sir, I am writing to you regarding
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items
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i
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at the hotel.

I stayed in the executive suite 12A for a business trip which lasted 5 days starting from 12th January to 16th January 2021. When
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i
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checked
out,
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i
was rushing to the airport
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as not to miss my flight which led to forgetting
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items in my room.

The items
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left
behind are my
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apple Macbook
and
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some
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work files. Both are
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very
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important
due to the fact that they contain
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important
and confidential information regarding my job.

I would be grateful if you can
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send
them to the address
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i
listed on my hotel book. I would
gladly
pay for extra cost.

Thank you for your assistance.

Yours
Faithfully
,
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Raimi
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Azeezat

IELTS letter You recently went on a business trip and stayed in a hotel. Upon your return home, you realised you left some things at the hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager stating, the details of your stay, the items you left behind, what you want the manager to do

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