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You recently went on a business trip and stayed in a hotel. Upon your return home, you realised you left some things at the hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager stating, the details of your stay, the items you left behind, what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir, I writing to inform you about my items which was forgotten in room 22 on the 21st of october 2022 with the name Rita Okologume. I checked-in around 1pm and checked -out exactly 11am the next day, which is a approximately a 1 day stay. The items forgotten are my Samsung note 8 mini laptop which has a blue colour with a headset attached to it. I can remember it was left it in the wadrobe close to the window side. It will be my utmost appreciation if your company could check through to know if the item must have been picked up. I look forward to hearing from you. Your sincerely, Rita Rex.
Dear Sir,

Did you mean "I'm writing", "I am writing", or "I was writing"?
I writing
to inform you about my items which
was forgotten
in room 22 on the 21st of
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october
2022 with the name Rita
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Okologume
. I
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checked
-in around 1pm and
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checked
-out exactly 11am the
next
day, which is
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
approximately a
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "1-day"
1 day
stay.

The items forgotten are my Samsung note 8 mini
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laptop
which has a blue
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colour
with a headset attached to it. I can remember it was
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left
it in the
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wadrobe
close to the window side.

It will be my utmost appreciation if your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
could
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check
through to know if the item
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must
have
been picked
up. I look forward to hearing from you.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

Rita Rex.

IELTS letter You recently went on a business trip and stayed in a hotel. Upon your return home, you realised you left some things at the hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager stating, the details of your stay, the items you left behind, what you want the manager to do

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  American English
6 paragraphs
116 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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