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Give me some advices on teaching skills

Give me some advices on teaching skills r8qKL

Dear sir My name is Robin I am 35 years aged and I am an English teacher I want to improve my teaching skills. I would appreciate if you could give a number of advice about to interest pupils to the new theme. We have some pupils who want to learn English language on the conrorary especially we have other pupils who do not interested in this theme. I tried to teach them with interesting materials with cartoons, fairy tales and games. On the controrary their attention did not attract. There is a huge problem with keeping their attention. How can I attract their attention? How can I help to my pupils with it? What can I do to make my lessons more interesting for them? Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. I understand that you are busy person, and any advice you offer would be gratly appreciated If it is helpful, I would be more than happy to discuss my questions over the phone or coffee. My contact details can be found at the end of this letter. i would appreciate if you could give me your advice in near future as possible. Yours faithfully Robin Taylor

Dear sir

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 would appreciate if you could give me your advice in near future as possible.

Yours faithfully
 Robin Taylor