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You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university.Write a letter to your friend in your letter.

You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend in your letter. m1N91
Dear Max. I am writing to enquire about to show me some evening entertainment. You know, I work in scientific research Department. I must learn their studing skills in the universities. Also I want to collect their unusual things, which is unique clothes, sports techniques. I hope my collection will be widening after my travel. I will stayed in a hotel of "Bright" near the park, after 2 weeks. I will be happy if you could let me show what entertainment in the evening. I am eager to show in natural life o people. All kinds regards, Diana Flur.
Dear Max. I am writing to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
about to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
evening entertainment. You know, I work in scientific research Department. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
learn their
Possible spelling mistake found.
studing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in the universities.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
I want to collect their unusual things, which is unique clothes, sports techniques. I hope my collection will be widening after my travel. I will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "stay"
stayed
in a hotel of
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Bright
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
near the park, after 2 weeks.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will be happy if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
what entertainment in the evening.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am eager to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
in natural life o
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. All kinds
You should probably use "regard".
regards
, Diana
Possible spelling mistake found.
Flur
.
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IELTS letter You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend in your letter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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