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Dear Siddharth, Hope you are doing well, my name is Mukta Agrawal; one of your voracious fans, I have been following you since 2 years now and last Friday at Bombar club, I could finally get a chance to see you, although; I was not allowed to meet you in person due to huge security arrangements still it was moreover like a dream come true. I have learnt music under the guidance of my guru Mr. Mohammad said and have performed in small school functions & award nights. I also run an NGO and have made a small group of 10 kids who aspire to become a budding artist in near future. I will be highly obliged if you conduct a special singing class for these young talents as a voluntary help which not only can contribute public image to you but also will help my no profit organization to get a chance to participate in large events and showcase the talent. We would be eagerly waiting for a positive reply from your side. Your’s Sincerely, Mukta Agrawal.

Dear Siddharth,

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Mukta
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Agrawal
; one of your voracious fans, I have been following you since 2 years This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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get
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see
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allowed
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meet
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come
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learnt
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 will be highly
 obliged if you conduct a special singing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 for these young talents as a voluntary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 which not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 can contribute public image to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 my no profit organization to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a chance to participate in large This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 and showcase the talent.

We would be eagerly
 waiting for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply from your side.

Did you mean "Your" or "Yours"?YourYours
Your’s
Sincerely
,

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Agrawal
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