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You recently bought a mobile phone for somebody she or he discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing

You recently bought a mobile phone for somebody she or he discovered that it was damaged and some components were missing NwY2W

Dear MadamI am writing to comlain about a mobile phone which I recently bought from your shop. After only three days later, things started to go wrong. On the second of October I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a mobile phone for my grandmother. Looking around the shop I encountered expected item and I asked a shop assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. Three days later my grandmother made a call and said about the problems of the item. When she used the first time it worked properly. But later when she made a call to her neighbor the phone did not work. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon as soon as possible and to receiving a new one. Please give this matter your immediate attention. Yours faithfullyAnorboyeva Diyora

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 about a mobile phone which I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. After This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 three days later, things This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to go This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
. On the second of October I visited one of your local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a mobile phone for my grandmother. Looking around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 I encountered This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 item and I asked a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. Three days later my grandmother made a call and said about the problems of the item. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 the first
 time it worked properly
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 later when she made a call to her neighbor the phone did not work. I am looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible and to receiving a new one. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 give this matter your immediate attention. Yours Possible spelling mistake found.
faithfullyAnorboyeva
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