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Write an email for boss about a person you talked to at the conference

Write an email for boss about a person you talked to at the conference MqQee

Dear Boss. I met an interesting person at a conference in Singapore. Here is some information about her: His name is Cindy Tan. She is a university gradute. She is 21 years old. She was born in Hong Kong and fluent Chinese, good standard of English. She is confident, moreover, her appearance is well-dressed. Her interests is conversasion and people. A person who is a good talker will help you schedule future partners. I think she is suitable for this position. She fulfills all the requirements, so I think she is a good candidate to be your assistant. However, she has no work experience and her field of study is not related to assistants. This is an issue that makes me consider. Let me know if you need any more information. Best wishes.

Dear Boss.

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some
 information about her:

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gradute
. She is 21 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
was born
 in Hong Kong and fluent Chinese, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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conversasion
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people
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help
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think
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 candidate to be your assistant.

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 me consider.

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Let
 me know if you need any more information.

Best wishes. 