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Hospital Reimbursement letter

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Hi Srini, Please be informed that my father (Pankar Agarwal) was admitted to Shanived hospital in Agra on 23rd September 2021 due to a severe stomachache, later discharged on 28th September 2021. He was first diagnosed with gallbladder stone, and after several tests, doctors identified other infections in his body. Hence they postponed the operation and started treating him for infection. Doctors decided to break the process into 2 phrases. 1. They treated him for infection and sent home to recover from the infection. 2. Once all test reports come normal, he will be readmitted to hospital for his gallbladder stone surgery. So as per the current plan, my father will be readmitted within a week, however the exact date of the surgery is dependent on test results. Kindly note that I have sent you the below documents related to 1st leg of hospitalization through DTDC, which was delivered to your Bangalore address on 12th October 2021. 1. Mediclaim form 2. Discharge Summary 3. Indoor case paper 4. Consolidated Final IP Bill 5. Lab Reports with bill 6. Medical bill / Consultant bill 7. Cancelled check 8. Photocopy of my Pan Card Also note that, I could not find any new claim request being in progress in Futurisk portal, please let me know if anything needs to be done from my end. Thanks & Regards, Karishma Mittal +91 8147006592
Hi
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Srini
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Please
be informed
that my father (
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Pankar
Agarwal)
was admitted
to
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Shanived
hospital in Agra on 23rd September 2021 due to a severe stomachache, later discharged on 28th September 2021.

He was
first
diagnosed with gallbladder stone, and after several
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tests
, doctors identified other infections in his body.
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Hence
they postponed the operation and
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started
treating him for infection.

Doctors decided to break the process into 2 phrases.

1. They treated him for infection and
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sent
home to recover from the infection.

2. Once all
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test
reports
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come
normal, he will
be readmitted
to hospital for his gallbladder stone surgery.

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So
as per the
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current
plan, my father will
be readmitted
within a week,
however
the exact date of the surgery is dependent on
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test
results.

Kindly note that I have
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sent
you the below documents related to 1st leg of hospitalization through
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DTDC
, which
was delivered
to your Bangalore address on 12th October 2021.

1.
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Mediclaim
form

2. Discharge Summary

3. Indoor case paper

4. Consolidated Final IP
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Bill 5
. Lab Reports with
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bill 6
. Medical
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bill
/ Consultant
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bill 7
. Cancelled
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check


8. Photocopy of my Pan
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Card


Also
note that, I could not find any new claim request being in progress in
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Futurisk
portal,
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please
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let
me know if anything needs to
be done
from my
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end
.

Thanks & Regards,

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Karishma
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Mittal


+91 8147006592
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IELTS letter Hospital Reimbursement letter

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  American English
12 paragraphs
228 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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