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You read this extract from an article in an English-language newspaper: I think most young people are selfish and only care about themselves. They need to get more involved in contributing to our communities and make positive decisions about wider issues when they are young. You decide to write a letter to the editor of the newspaper explaining your views on the points raised in the article and giving reasons for your opinions.

You read this extract from an article in an English-language newspaper: I think most young people are selfish and only care about themselves. They need to get more involved in contributing to our communities and make positive decisions about wider issues when they are young. You decide to write a letter to the editor of the newspaper explaining your views on the points raised in the article and giving reasons for your opinions. YR6pB
Dear the newspaper editor, In vour newest newspaper, I can see there is an article that said "I think most young people are selfish and only care about themselves. They need to get more involved in contributing to our communities and make positive decisions about wider issues when they are young. " The reason I write this letter to you is to explain my views on this point and the reasons for my opinion for the articles. First of all, I totally agree with that opinion. In my view, people nowadays, especially young people, are being more selfish and piggish. They only care about themselves and don't care about other people no matter what. I mean not everyone, but most young people are being selfish and think that it's cool to act like that. It seems to me that people always want the best things to happen to them because of cupid, and that's not a surprising reason at all because who doesn't want good things to happen to them? Furthermore, like the article has mentioned, I consider that people should get more involved in coming up with our communities and make effective decisions about greater issues when they are in their early ages. Social nowadays looks simple, but actually people are making it more difficult and complicated over time. Thus, individuals, especially young individuals, need to have more community connection and help others about bigger issues. For instance, they can join donation communities or help people with environmental protection. To all intents and purposes, selfishness doesn't help people to get better or be more productive, it just makes them more stubborn and lazier. Overall, selfishness is very unenthusiastic. It makes people become more piggish and idle day by day. Everyone should prepare themselves to make decisions with great issues and contributing ideas for communities.
Dear the newspaper editor,

In
vour
newest
newspaper, I can
see
there is an article that said
"
I
think
most
young
people


are selfish and
only
care about themselves. They need to
get
more involved in contributing to

our
communities
and
make
positive
decisions about wider
issues
when they are
young
.
"
The

reason I write this letter to you is to
explain
my views on this point and the reasons for my

opinion for the articles.

First of all
, I
totally
agree
with that opinion. In my view,
people
nowadays,
especially
young

people
, are being more selfish and piggish. They
only
care about themselves and don't care

about other
people
no matter what. I mean not everyone,
but
most
young
people
are being

selfish and
think
that it's cool to act like that. It seems to me that
people
always want the best

things to happen to them
because
of cupid, and that's not a surprising reason at all
because


who doesn't want
good
things to happen to them?

Furthermore
, like the article has mentioned, I consider that
people
should
get
more involved in

coming up with our
communities
and
make
effective decisions about greater
issues
when they

are in their early ages. Social nowadays looks simple,
but
actually
people
are making it more

difficult and complicated over time.
Thus
, individuals,
especially
young
individuals, need to

have more
community
connection and
help
others about bigger
issues
.
For instance
, they can

join
donation
communities
or
help
people
with environmental protection. To all intents and

purposes, selfishness doesn't
help
people
to
get
better or be more productive, it
just
makes


them more stubborn and lazier.

Overall
, selfishness is
very
unenthusiastic. It
makes
people
become more piggish and idle day

by day. Everyone should prepare themselves to
make
decisions with great
issues
and

contributing
ideas
for
communities
.
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IELTS letter You read this extract from an article in an English-language newspaper: I think most young people are selfish and only care about themselves. They need to get more involved in contributing to our communities and make positive decisions about wider issues when they are young. You decide to write a letter to the editor of the newspaper explaining your views on the points raised in the article and giving reasons for your opinions.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
305 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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