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Your local newspaper is going through hold a competition where one person who has done most to help local community will be awarded. Write a letter to the editor Name and describe about the person you think could in this competition, How you know this person, How he was helped the community,

Your local newspaper is going through hold a competition where one person who has done most to help local community will be awarded. Write a letter to the editor Name and describe about the person you think could in this competition, How you know this person, How he was helped the community, GLggj

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to your given advert regarding competition for the best person who was helped to the society. I would like to suggest one name Ms. Ekta Raval. She is not only voulentory worker for NGOs, but also doing charity works for orphan age childs. Moreover, She is the youngest coordinator of slum child welfare of Ahmedabad city. Although she is the youngest society member of us, after her college hours who has been working profoundly to help poor people since last 2 years. In addition to that, we were studying together in the same class for medicine course for 4 years. Why I think that she is the right candidate for winner of your advert, because of being a student she does not has money to help to other famine. She is creating an awareness to donate used products like clothes, shoes, bedsheets and foods among the people. She is taking extra mile to collect all those stuffs and personally deliver to roadside dwellers in summner, winter as well as in monsoon season. Nevertheless from hectic study life she is still managing this heartfelt work so nicely for needy people. I hope this information of my friend might be finish your search regarding best winner of your award ceremony. Yours faithfully, Sati

Dear Sir,

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in regards to
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 advert regarding competition for the best person who was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 to the society.

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. She is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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voulentory
 worker for NGOs, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
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childs
. Moreover
, She is the youngest coordinator of slum child welfare of Ahmedabad city.

Although she is the youngest society member of us, after her college hours who has been working profoundly
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 since last 2 years. In addition
 to that, we were studying together in the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 for medicine course for 4 years.

Why I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that she is the right candidate for winner of your advert, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of being a student she does not The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: "have"have
has
 money to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to other famine. She is creating an awareness to donate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 products like clothes, shoes, bedsheets and foods among the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. She is taking extra mile to collect all those stuffs and personally
 deliver to roadside dwellers in Possible spelling mistake found.summerSummerSumnersummoner
summner
, winter as well
 as in monsoon season. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Nevertheless,
Nevertheless
 from hectic study life she is still
 managing this heartfelt work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
nicely
 for needy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

I hope this information of my friend might be finish your search A determiner is probably missing here: "regarding the best".regarding the best
regarding best
 winner of your award ceremony.

Yours faithfully
,

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Sati