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Dear VyWe haven’t seen each other for a long time. How have you been? How are you getting on with your studies? What have you been up to

Dear VyWe haven’t seen each other for a long time. How have you been? How are you getting on with your studies? What have you been up to 86DYr
Dear Vy, We haven’t seen each other for a long time. How have you been? How are you getting on with your studies? What have you been up to? I hope everything is satisfactory. You know, I’m studying at a university in Ho Chi Minh City. There are a lot of interesting things in the city. This is a chance for me to try doing something new. I major in business administration of the university of Ho Chi Minh City. My school is located in the center of the city about 6 kilometers from the dormitory. I have to study all day and during shift. You know, sometimes I feel tired and very depressed but I got used to it. Beside, lecturers are very enthusiatic. They support students in many ways. I know a lot of friends here. I am so lucky when made friend with Ly – one of my friends. She helps me everything. Especially, Ly knows the way of listening to others. She always listen to my stories and give me some really good advice. My life has changed a lot from daily activities, learning, relationships, and everything. The first time, I am under pressure because I have too much work to do in a short time. It took me along time to adapt and and now I was balanced them. I used to depend on my family, which means I always get support from my parents. However, I myself prefer an independent life, I'll do everything I can to avoid further problems for parents. Although, this isn’t my favorite major but I still trying to finish well for the future. And how about you? Tell me something about you! I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon Your friend Trung Kien
Dear
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,

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seen
each other for a long
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. How have you been? How are you getting on with your studies? What have you been up to? I hope
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everything
is satisfactory.

You
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know
, I’m studying at a university in Ho Chi Minh City. There are
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a lot of
interesting things in the city. This is a chance for me to try doing something new.

I major in business administration of the university of Ho Chi Minh City. My school
is located
in the center of the city about 6 kilometers from the dormitory. I
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have to
study all day and during shift. You
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know
,
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sometimes
I feel tired and
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very
depressed
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but
I
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got
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used
to it. Beside, lecturers are
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very
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enthusiatic
. They support students in
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many
ways.

I
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know
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a lot of
friends here. I am
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so
lucky when made friend with
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Ly
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–
one of my friends. She
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helps
me
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everything
.
Especially
,
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Ly
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knows
the way of listening to others. She always
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listen
to my stories and give me
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some
really
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good
advice.

My life has
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changed
a lot from daily activities, learning, relationships, and
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everything
. The
first
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time
, I am under pressure
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because
I have too much work to do in a short
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time
. It took me along
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time
to adapt
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and and
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now
I
was balanced
them. I
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used
to depend on my family, which means I always
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get
support from my parents.
However
, I myself prefer an independent life, I'll do
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everything
I can to avoid
further
problems for parents.

Although, this isn’t my favorite major
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but
I
still
trying to finish well for the future.

And how about you?
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Tell
me something about you! I’m looking forward to hearing from you
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soon


Your friend

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Trung
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Kien
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294 words
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