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You recently visited a store and did not like the customer service there. Write a letter to the store manager and say: 1) What was the issue there? 2) Why wasn't the staff helpful? 3)Suggest what can be done about it?

You recently visited a store and did not like the customer service there. Write a letter to the store manager and say: 1) What was the issue there? 2) Why wasn't the staff helpful? 3)Suggest what can be done about it? 9QRBr

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report a complaint I had while I was visiting one of your stores. I visited to your London Bridge branch last week which was Friday. I went to the electronics section in order to buy a new pair of headphones. However, I realized some of the headphones of the same company were torn apart and kept for sale. Therefore, I called the manager/supervisor of the store, Miss Ayushi, to let her know the situation. I was hoping for a good customer service but she was very rude and it is not a proper way to treat a customer. I am very disappointed by poor quality of your products and disrespectful treatment from your staff. I hope you understand the situation and I expect you to take strict action against your employee and make sure they are trained properly in customer service. Because their actions can harm the reputation of the company. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Shubham Chauhan

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to report a complaint I had while I was visiting one of your stores.

I visited to your London Bridge branch last week which was Friday. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 went to the electronics section in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a new pair of headphones. However
, I realized If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 headphones of the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
were torn
 apart and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 for sale. Therefore
, I called the manager/supervisor of the store, Miss Possible spelling mistake found.SushiKyushuAnushaAyasdiAyesha
Ayushi
, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 her know the situation. I was hoping for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 customer service This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 rude and it is not a proper way to treat a customer.

I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 disappointed by poor quality of your products and disrespectful treatment from your staff. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 hope you understand the situation and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 you to take strict action against your employee and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure they are trained
properly
 in customer service. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 their actions can harm the reputation of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours Faithfully
,

Shubham Chauhan