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Last week your colleagues at the office threw a surprise party to celebrate your promotion. Write a letter to a friend telling him/her about the party

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Last week your colleagues at the office threw a surprise party to celebrate your promotion. Write a letter to a friend telling him/her about the party. Dear Anna I am writing to describe about a surprise party which my colleagues suddenly celebrated me for promotion last week. As you know, I work with a great colleagues at the office together. Wheares they are seemed as my family. Last month I got Certificate C1 so they organized a small party for my achievement. When opened the door were splited ballons, poured golds and were applauded by group was brought a big box. Out manager John said me that I must open it. Hovewer that time I was a great exited it. This gift was a modern TV. Furthermore we danced, ate some sweets. I was very happy and told thanks again my friends for the prrsent whether for the party. So I always consider it a pleasant memory. Anyway I think if anybody achieve some kid of cource it should promotion his/ her. The most interesting side is that I have aimed high which will take Certificate Aptis. I really enjoyed this party and never forget it. I hope all our colleagues will get many achievement in the future. Yours sincerely Feruza.

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 to celebrate your promotion. Write a letter to a friend telling him/her about the party.

Dear Anna

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Furthermore
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some
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very
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told
 thanks again my friends for the Possible spelling mistake found.present
prrsent
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party
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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achieve
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some
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cource
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should promotion
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Aptis
.

I really
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party
 and never forget it. I hope all our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomradeteammatebuddyassistantaidefriend
colleagues
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
Possible agreement error. The noun achievement seems to be countable; consider using: "many achievements".many achievements
many achievement
 in the future.

Yours sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.NerudaFerule
Feruza
. 